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Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby ub_centaur » Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:16 pm

My second story,
sorry if its a bit short, but im new to the whole story writing thing.
Involves a young man at his parents farm, a huge balled horse, and a mare.
Feedback would be appreciated.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby soline » Sun Jun 08, 2008 3:23 am

Nice!, you are a great writer (more so because I love horse vore)
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby JamesTakenaka » Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:31 pm

Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby t4capt » Sun Jun 08, 2008 5:07 pm

very good, but I'm a little more partial to longer story's

maybe longer like at least five pages but hey if you have add like me ..:idea:.. lets ride bikes
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby Groblek » Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:24 am

Very nice - I've always liked cock vore that leads to unbirth. I agree, I'd try and draw the story out longer, experiment with description and such. Still, you're certainly improving, and I encourage you to keep writing - it's the only way to get better at it.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby hio45 » Wed Sep 24, 2008 8:37 pm

very cool story, noticed a few spelling errors but hey, who cares, the story was still gud

keep up the gud work
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby haphazard » Sun Sep 28, 2008 2:18 am

The story is awesome almost my type of vore. I think that you should continue with your writing. I hope to enjoy another of your stories.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby The Requester » Thu Mar 26, 2009 1:17 am

Well done I enjoyed the story
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby Radijs » Fri Mar 27, 2009 8:17 pm

An improvement to the previous story I read by you. Its a little short for my tastes and I think you can afford to be a little more descriptive still.
By all means keep writing!
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby Razgriz » Fri Mar 27, 2009 8:46 pm

JamesTakenaka wrote:Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P


de-sexed not resexed. :3

means she had her overies cut or whatever they do to horses.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby Squirelly » Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:55 pm

Razgriz wrote:
JamesTakenaka wrote:Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P


de-sexed not resexed. :3

means she had her overies cut or whatever they do to horses.

The story says that she had been desexed. He was wondering how it had been undone. My guess is that the horses used this as a way to get around the desexing.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby ublover1 » Sat Mar 28, 2009 1:08 am

Nice story i liked it:)
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby Throat_Wolf » Tue May 05, 2009 7:49 pm

Neat little story.

Though as a point of order, from someone who lives on a farm, female horses generally are not ever de-sexed. Equine birth control is done by gelding the stallions. Mares are just penned up to keep them from getting pregnant.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby darklord » Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:13 am

ub_centaur wrote:My second story,
sorry if its a bit short, but im new to the whole story writing thing.
Involves a young man at his parents farm, a huge balled horse, and a mare.
Feedback would be appreciated.

looks good I read it a few times before I joined EKA's.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby knightsrest » Sun Sep 15, 2013 1:22 am

ub_centaur, A short story but a good one, do you still write them or have you stopped for good?
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

Postby Paraffine » Sun Sep 15, 2013 1:57 am

knightsrest wrote:ub_centaur, A short story but a good one, do you still write them or have you stopped for good?


The account says: "Last visited: Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:47 am". So I think it is safe to say: stopped :/
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